Originally Posted by Kelli Busey
I find it offense that in a GLBT advocacy forum you advocate for censorship(someone get a red pencil). It is that objectionable behaviour that creates divides in our culture.
I am not a English major. I am a transgender truck driver living in the joy of Jesus and living Authentically.
Guh? Nobody said anything about censorship. He simply suggested that it could use a little editing for clarity. In general, if someone takes the time to write in their best possible voice, I'm much more likely to understand what they're saying.
Especially if you're releasing a statement for important advocacy, it would be in your (and our) best interest to present your statement clearly. If you know that this might not be your forte, see if someone else whose skills lie in that area can help you clean it up.
I'm not sure why you're taking out your frustration on BruceChris, but it's misplaced and undeserved.