Nate,
Have you already sent this in, or are you asking for feedback/suggestions/editing?
Very good 'voice'. The letter appears to be lengthy - did you already check to see whether this Union has a word limit on letters to the editor?
Z
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Never linger too long with the ignorant,
throw stones at their talk.
Walk only with the lovers,
the mirror of the soul gets rusty when
dipped in muddy water.
-Rumi
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